The photo and execution of the piece are both rock solid. I feel like the design has a little too much going on. I find that my eye is wandering too much and becoming overwhelmed by all the graphics. Also--not knowing the establishment--I have no idea what the "Early Bird Special" refers to. Is it half price? Is it coffee? Does the Admiral Theatre show movies? The flyer works for someone that already knows and understands the location, but will do little to draw in new customers.
I like the look of it. However the paint splatter is bit unnecessary. May be some kind of lighting effect of shine might work. but over all look pretty futuristic and retro at the same time.
Much better than the zombie one. I think the paint splashes are a bit unnecessary when the rest of it seems to be going for a clean, shiny futuristic feel. But what do I know?
we usually try to go as conservative as possible with the promo material so that we don't have trouble getting it printed anywhere. although.. there is that topless sticky bun girl I shot that has been running every week in the sun times for the past 4 years. lol
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